Wednesday, April 1, 2009
Week 10
This week we are writing concluding paragraphs. Pretend that you wrote an essay about your Spring Break. Write a concluding paragraph that summarizes or restates the main points of the "essay". Include personal comments as well. Mine would be: All and all, I enjoyed my Spring Break. Playing lots of tennis, volunteering in my kids' school and organizing my house, school papers and clothes were the highlights. It wasn't as exciting as past Spring Breaks when I've traveled to Florida or Hawaii, but this time, I truly feel relaxed and ready to work for 8 more weeks.
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In short, I had several experiences in my Spring Break. I ate great sushi when I went to Facebook office in Palo Alto. Another day, there was a big conference for software engineers at San Francisco. After that I had nice dinner with new friends who also come to the conference. The last day of break, dorm-mate and I had seafood lunch at Santa Cruz. I didn't travel far from here, but I met some new friends and ate a lot of tasty foods. It was nice Spring Break.
ReplyDeleteActually, my Spring Break was exciting as i thought. I went to L.A. to help my friend apply his school, by the way, we went to Disney Land and had more fun in there. After that, i spent almost Spring Break times at home for sleeping, eating and watching TV. I truly feel relaxed and ready to study hard to take high TOEFL scored next MAY.
ReplyDeleteAll in all, I just stayed in bay area during my spring break. Going shopping, taking a walk in Muir Wood International Park, and having a picnic in Alum Rock Park. Although I didn't visit many pretty spots, I still had a lot of fun. Besides, I have started to plan my next vacation.
ReplyDeleteIn short, I had finished three things that I wanted to do in spring break. I had visited the Stanford University and the Stanford shopping center, and found the difference between the San Jose State University and the Stanford University. It was exciting for passing the written test of driving. This was a little difficulty to me because the rules of driving are a bit different from Taiwan. I found a shopping center that I had never been there before, and then I bought a small vest that I wanted. This spring break was substantial for me.
ReplyDeleteIn short, when it comes to my spring break, i have done lots of things. For one thing, i, clare and other friends visited the Stanford University, which is amazing, and it is so good and beautiful. For the other, one of my sister's best friends have visited us for one week. We went to go shopping and church together. She is so lovely girl and we have lots of common interests. I was very happy with her. At last, my sister's friend's parents also came America to visit their daughter, so my sister's friend invited us to her house and had a dinner together. In addition, we take her parents show around the Northern CA. Thus, i have a wonderful time during the spring break. However, now i should concerntrate on preparing for IBT.
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ReplyDeleteBroadly speaking, I had a good time in spring break. I spent all afternoon in San Francisco on first Saturday of the break. I passed the driving written test last Tursday. Then had a delicious dinner in the Cheesecake Factory. I went shopping in the Great Mall and bought two clothes of Nike. I started to practice driving after my sister went back home from work. This break helps me to get used to live here and study in the coming weeks.
ReplyDeleteActually, I spent almost all time at my aunt home. I didn’t go far away but I went to San Francisco to meet my old friend. She is living on campus, so I stayed one night at my fiend room. At night, we cooked Mexican food and watched movie together. Next day, we went shopping. At my aunt house, I studied for TOEFL to get good score in May. My spring break was simple but I had great time with my friends and aunt family.
ReplyDeleteAll in all, I couldn't do a lot of things in spring break. I spent most time for part time job. However, When I had day-off, I hung out with my friends. We had a party for one friend who went back his country. During spring break, I was busy a little bit, but that time was not exciting. I was tired and bored.
ReplyDeleteAll in all, In Spring vacation, I spent most time with my friend. I stayed my friend room in domitory, I hang out with my friends, I went to Asian movie festival and shopping and we made delicious foods. Althought I spent almost time in downtown, I could make lots of good memory with my friend.
ReplyDeleteIn short, it was not really an interesting Spring Break. The most interesting I had that I bought a car. Then, I just stayed at home or going out for breakfast with my grandparents. I hope I could go to school as soon as posible, because it was boring to stay at home during one week and did nothing.
ReplyDeleteAll in all, I had a really good vacation. I visited Las Vegas, San francisco with my friend. We had really fun in those places because she took me a new place in there. And also I passed the driving written test. Everything was nice experiences. Even thought I couldn't take a rest well, I have had a good time in this spring vacation.
ReplyDeleteIn short, I have done a lot of things during the spring break, such as buying a new laptop, finding a house and visiting the Las Angeles. That’s why I was very busy, but I actually enjoyed this life. Furthermore, when I came back San Jose, I am fill with motivation to study English.
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ReplyDeleteIn shhort, having a vacantion can get many chances for going to another places, which can't go usual days. Also, we speak English more by having time with forigien friends. and cooking for my friends. It was quite meanful vacation for doing something valuable.
ReplyDeleteIn short, my spring break was nothing special. I just had a party in my house with my friends. I went to shopping mall, and I studied English. It was one of the worst vacations in my life because I didn’t do any special thing during spring break. Therefore, I really waited for new session.
ReplyDeleteAll in all, I’v been busy doing many things in Korea during this spring break. I helped getting ready for my younger sister’s wedding with my mom. And after wedding day, I met my college friends that I haven’t seen in 9 years. I don’t think I’ll forget this spring break because of the good memories I had.
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